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Old 08-15-2007, 11:18 AM
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When I started out online several years ago one of
the things I struggled with was bad sales copy.

At first I thought my offer wasn't good enough or
that I just wasn't receiving enough traffic.

Then it hit me, I was letting hundreds if not
thousand of dollars slip away, by not using proper
sales copy techniques.

One of the fundamentals of any online success is
having proven and tested profit pulling sales copy
in place.

The problem is, it often takes years of practice or
hiring very expensive copywriting experts to get it
right.

Luckily, you can catch a f.ree tele-seminar from a
proven expert in the field...

David Garfinkel is the founder of the World
Copywriting Institute and he's doing something
Thursday August 16th he's never done before and
probably won't again.

On Thursday, at 5 pm Pacific, he's going to do
a bare-knuckled, no-holds-barred COPY CRITIQUE
of a web page for the World Internet Main Event
where he's speaking next month...

What's different is he's doing it--In public.

Here's why he's nervous...

A few years ago, he spoke at a very successful
internet entrepeneur's seminar. Who told David
that he did NOT want ANY static... challenges...
criticism... or controversy about his content,
methods, or anything else that had to do with
him directly or indirectly.

David was agreeable back then...

... but HE WON'T agree to "play nice" anymore!

On the public review of the web page on Thursday...

Paulie Sabol is in for a good, hard-core, cut-to-
the-quick copy critique, the same as he does with
his high-end mentoring clients.

But there's a difference. With the private clients,
it's always in private.)

It's too late for Paulie to say,

"Aw, Garfinkel's too ***critical.***
I'm not sure I want him speaking after all."

David isn't "hoping" to make Paulie's life
miserable.

But he's going to do EVERYTHING to improve the
copy.

But if a few harsh words need to be uttered to get
him to see the errors of his (copywriting) ways,
then, hey -- so be it!

... and you're invited to listen in when all the
fun begins!

Date: Thursday, August 16

Time: 5 p.m. Pacific / 8 p.m. Eastern

Call in info: go to

-->Listen to the Tele-Seminar


Note: If you would like to see the page he will be
critiquing in advance, go to:

==> Website critique

Pay special attention to what he's said about David
in the copy. See if you can guess how he's going to
respond to THAT!

By the way, the copy is for the World Internet Main
Event seminar (WIME), taking place in San Francisco
September 13-16.

This is the ONLY Internet Marketing seminar David will
be attending or speaking at this year. If you are
interested in finding out more, simply look at the page
I'm critiquing for the WIME:

==> Website critique

As for the call Thursday night, you can listen in on
the phone or via Webcast! Here's the link for more
information about the call itself:

Listen to the Tele-seminar

Hope to see you on the call Thursday, or catch
the replay later...

Cheers,

Matthew Sherborne
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Old 08-16-2007, 07:10 AM
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The copywriting critique webcast with David Garfinkel starts today. Check the link above for more information. If you happen to miss it you should be able to listen to the webcast audios afterwards.
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This looks interesting, plus I need help with my sales pages and copywriting skills, I'll check it out.
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Old 08-16-2007, 05:44 PM
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That was a very interesting copywriting webcast by David Garfinkel and Paulie Sabol.

They covered a lot of ground in this call about exactly what you need to make your sales pages sell. Subjects like how to tell a story in your testimonials, which details make your sales copy speak to the reader and some interesting information about using audio in the sales page.

He even critiqued the guy's hairdoo, harsh...

For those of you who missed it you can catch the replay from the link above.
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That interview was quite good, I hadn't hard of either of those two before this call. Thanks for sharing this informtion Matthew
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That was a very interesting copywriting webcast by David Garfinkel and Paulie Sabol.

He even critiqued the guy's hairdoo, harsh...
That dude got blasted for his old school hairdoo, it was pretty funny. I enjoyed the interview, some useful copywriting advice there.
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